Lonely can occur anywhere.
She was lonely in her car,
lonely in her room,
lonely in her thoughts,
lonely in the sea of people.
and she broke.
You need to love her like she is something to be learned
for she is trapped in world you know nothing about
and love is the escape.
Back bones do break, but the things that are bending
now are her soul, her heart, and her ability to keep attending
but violence reports are pending
because she can't figure out how to tell you that her demons
are winning, that loading bar is spinning.
Death said now, she said I'm not sure how,
its all just a challenge and she doesn't
think she will ever be the champion.
I love how they all went together and told a story. This is really good
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ReplyDeleteI was thinking hey these kind of relate I wonder if that was on purpose wow that's a really good order to put them in I wonder if that was on purpose holy crap she made a story out of them but I think this is based on a true story,
On many true stories,
I bet that was on purpose.
When I was making them in class I actually didn't consciously try to make them work together. I think that just kind of happened because of where my mind while I was making them.
DeleteBut when I was putting this post together I thought it was funny that they all connected.
Whoa, yes.
ReplyDelete"She broke." #stolen
this is SO GOOD. just the rhythm of it all. i love it.
ReplyDeleteThis is so amazing! Blending other words with your own, wow.
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